Sunday, February 22, 2009

I'Ve Been Addicted To You Comments

Rating: 5.0

By the sugariness of your milk
By the womanliness of your silk

By the fragrance of red rose
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Anthony Foster 07 March 2009

How natural events and things can remind of a good woman. When in love everything is in primary colours.

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Well, like all the women I really like this poem! It flows, it rhymes and it is speaking so delightfully to a woman. Karin Anderson

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 February 2009

Wow! Terrific. The kind of style in poetry I always adore. Please try my poem MY QUESTIONS. You may like it.

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Linda Winchell 24 February 2009

Ah, the fragrant words of a man in love. Great peice you must well know by now. God Bless, Linda Peace to you and your great nation.

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Emma7 J 24 February 2009

interesting, i like it, good peom

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Madeline Berry 24 February 2009

Great desciptions, really interesting and moving piece.

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2009

this poem says it all..and now, i am addicted to read this again.I love this, my friend

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

Flowing like milk, a poem that is lyrical in its composition and yes we can become addicted to being in love, 10 Lynda xx

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Tsira Goge 23 February 2009

Hello Amir, The Gentle poem... very graceful frankness for the favourite...10.... Best wishes, Tsira

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Fay Slimm 23 February 2009

This reads almost like a song - and is a warm love poem with a reference to a past rather than a present love - but a beautiful appeal to romance...... a10 from Fay

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 23 February 2009

Its romantic and definately sweet. You'll win over someones heart with this. It makes me feel so warm inside. Good write.

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There is such a lilting flow to this poem of yours. Just a simply divine piece of love! Karin Anderson

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Ency Bearis 23 February 2009

She might be hypnotized you so you addicted to her..but a good addiction..not to substance abuse...nice write...10

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Viola Grey 22 February 2009

the only kind of addiction I could ever understand....nicely said

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Linda Ori 22 February 2009

Beautifully phrased. And such a lovely addiction. Your sentiments are vivid and expressive. Well done! Linda

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Evaughn Gray 22 February 2009

i love how you explain your version of an addiction, it was lovely..~Hazel G.E

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Anjali Sinha 22 February 2009

warm addiction good write as always --10 anjali

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