Tuesday, June 30, 2009

I'Ve Always Been The Girl Comments

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I've always been the girl in the background,
a shadow, know one embraced.
To afraid to talk to him,
face to face.
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jasmin bell
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Kamal Saxena 26 November 2009

Why you underrate yourself is a secret. But in my view virtue leaves a lasting impression, not the carnal beauty. The poem is not technically perfect, yet it can be read for the sincereity and cadence of the poetess. Kamal Saxena India

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