Friday, February 24, 2012

I Understand 'Fantasy' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will there ever be a place in your heart
Or is this thing, just fire and sparks
A burn that's held me, decades long
How can it flame, and still be wrong
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Leria Hawkins
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Original Unknown Girl 28 February 2012

Wonderfully poignant, bittersweet, tell it like it is poem that socks it to him both barrels.... I feel the pain in this one though... Great write as always Leria: -) xx

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Thomas Duncky 25 February 2012

Wow u have such a wand on love poems...I would recommend every poet to read your poems! Nice work 10/10

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Leria Hawkins

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