I Tumble, Tumble On The Steps… Comments
I tumble, tumble on the steps;
The never opened doors…
Is your heart made of stone walls?
That doesn’t have some gorse
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A very cute poem; rhymes and rrythm is pleasing to read. I enjoyed it much...a 10
I like the approach and path you took with this poem. My kind of stuff.
Ample and ample For, Stone walls to hear Humble and humble Are, Soft nerved tongue Simple and simple To - Seek for sweetness Crumble and crumble That -Unwilling Heart Dear poet, just the effect of this great write of yours. Wonderful wonderful read. Thank you so much.
wonderful, unique poem has different taste..loved your way much...
We stumble, stumble over lines each step we climb leaves tred yet poetic nature stays unsaid... Kesav, thanks for your welcoming...
the aches and pains so melodiously expressed..! one thing is for sure you have not fumbled at all, your thoughts have reached your readers in most lucid manner
Clever little poem..reminds me of someone sitting on the banks of a river pulling petals from a daisy ' She love me She loves me not' I think she will+++10 regards
Nicely stylised and with a flow that is hypnotic to it. Nice poem, Kesav!
Good write.........................................................10s
Excellent lyric metaphorical poem, thank you for sharing..........10++++++++++
I agree with Sarvesh. This is a lyrical poem with a wonderful flow to it. The questions are well done and it is soft and beautiful. 10 love Karin
a very soft and lyrical poem.... just loved to glide through. soothing composition. thank you sir.
poem with a great flow. liked the rhythm. simple but heart touching
Very humble and heart felt feelings, Kesav. Lyrical and thoughtfully sweet. '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
Whether you tumble or grumble, sir, you have nowhere fumbled in this lovely poem.........regards....
living with a thorn in the soul is the saddest of all..........
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A lovely poem, playful and yet serious, Kesav... P.S. Here are a few lines in spontaneous response: our poems here dear Kesav are our whispers that we each share....