Sunday, March 15, 2009

I Try To Forget Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was praying, I was crying when I was praying

I closed my eyes
I didn’t let my tears fall
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Reihaneh Jalalian
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sky dreams 18 April 2009

very captivating.. its really deep and sad, with that glimmer of hope at the end, great job on this one

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Oluko George 16 March 2009

So catching a poem is.We can feel you cry with you, and even forgive him!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 15 March 2009

very lovely! keep writing!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 March 2009

rebirth after forgiveness, thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

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James Nall 15 March 2009

Very good! Writing our feelings is very difficult. you did a fine job, i gave you the 10 you deserved. please read my SECOND CHANCE

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Mohammed Albalushi 15 March 2009

touchable poem alot of pain, well write dear

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~ Jon London ~ 15 March 2009

A very touching page of sorrow, tender lines of weeping words Lovely piece

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