I Try Comments

i hope this doesn't offend you, , , , but maybe you are trying a little too hard? maybe that's the problem... you try hard... and i NOT hard enough.... This words touch me deeply, for i have been here, yet, i'm not here anymore, because of this feelings i don't really know who i am. I am a mature woman, who depends only on herself, who doesn't ask for help. But i am trying to hard to please everyone and just be a better person because it is simply a good deed and it makes people BELIEVE i am a better person or do I really believe i am a better person? Confusing, yep, i'm confusing, i am even confusing myself.......X: I get off track really easy, forgive me if i give you a head ache just for trying to understand what i say. I am not very good with words, but you are! ! When i read this poem i felt sandness, anger, frustation......... The emotion is all there, some people have to read between the lines and some people just read and go deeper than just the words or some, those lazy people, just read and ONLY understand the obvious. anyways, i better let you go before i bore you to death sincerely, Lolita