Thursday, July 6, 2006

I Trusted You Comments

Rating: 4.5

I trusted you to get me through to the end
And yet i believe you gave up at the begining
No matter the forgivness, it was never enough
Al i asked was honesty, but i didnt get much
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Guarded Heart
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Christopher Cofield 06 July 2006

Hey Heart, This is terribly sad and amazing, tugs at the soul...keep your chin up kiddo! Christopher

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Ruby Root 06 July 2006

Hi Guarded heart, really sad and emotional poem. It was really written well but again you sound so unhappy. You use of expression and imagery was excellent. Take great care, I hope things get better for you.

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Guarded Heart

Guarded Heart

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