Monday, May 3, 2010

I Trusted You Comments

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I trusted you

I loved you I thought you loved me too
You wanted magic I am magic I showed you
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growing out of a shatterd dream
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mohsin amin khan 03 May 2010

RAELLY AMAZING FLOW IN THE POEM PROTECTING ALL FROM BEING SCATTERED YOU HAVE MENTIONED RATHER DESRIBED EVERY LINE WITH A GREAT FLOW THIS POEM MAKES ME FEEL I CAN BREATH TWICE IN ONE BREATH VITORIA YOU ALWAYS WILL BE VICTORY

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