Before this body turns to dust
Before this world I leave
Upon The Lord I've placed my trust
Upon The Rock I'll cleave
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" I trust my life to Christ The Lord I trust in Heaven’s Door I trust in God’s Almighty Sword I’ll trust Him evermore…" Yest it's the trust that matters always... thanks
Well done my friend... The poem is perfect, the message is true, the lines well organised. God bless you
Another spiritual poem that offers food for thought. I know punctuation helps poetry, just as exclamation marks help to make the words convey the passion. You might also consider 8 lined verses to keep the reader on track and not scroll down further for a long poem, added to by extra line gaps. I admire the Scripture terms used which explain that our Royal Pardon was bought and paid for by the Redeemer promised in the Book of Genesis, when Adam and Eve sinned. Upon sharing your faith, Jesus says He is not ashamed to call you His brother...
great poem, its so full of faith and trust, and thats the way everyone should be
great poem, its so full of faith and trust, and i think thats the way it should always be.
An interesting piece, embued with faith; enjoyed the simply approach to sharing your joy without explaining why; I look forward to reading more of your work. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
Acts 16: 31 They replied, 'Believe in the Lord Jesus, and you will be saved—you and your household.' I love this poem!
wow amen! I admire your trust in Jesus. I wish I could say in full truth: 'I trust my life to Christ The Lord'... Well, I do, but your faith seems stronger than mine. -Cheng Zheng
WoW! this is a very beautiful poem Michael. Thank you for sharing!
a truly inspirational and heartfelt poem.i admire your trust in Jesus Christ.
dear michael, i love this line; Upon the rock I'll cleave. great write, keep this up.
JESUS CHRIST is the TRUTH who sets me FREE from satan's lies. I CAN TRUST JESUS who redeemed ME. HE is MY FAITHFUL FORGIVING HEALER