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Tessoro Lovely One, I am glad I have you here I had no time for shtyle HUGS

Beautiful Just Another_man25 minutes ago yu are a mastered of your words... great job Comment +1

Average Charlene Flanagan23 minutes ago I always believe that poetry, in essence, should never be edited. However, if you choose to write in a language that you're not very comfortable in, I would strongly recommend you review it before you post it. The message is powerful. And the line I speak controlled language is proof that one does need to review his/her work. I don't mean to be harsh. The poem is beautiful. What ruined it for me is the obvious language errors. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago enjoy poetry i am not englishman

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