I Tried Comments

So what if I read it before a-it so good that I came back for more!

It feels good to know that you are trying to toch the morning mist or to go to rainbow or else trying to listen the voice of God. Valerie, even if you can not achieve these noble efforts will pull you to a much better place.

The soul of a true poetess is wrting here. Trying to reach for the light, for the dew, but feeling it is slipping out of our sight and hands, very nicely written. Sometimes we wonder why but there is no ready answer. Writing this wonderful poem is huge success by itself. Sometimes we try to many things, but when Val reaches for the pen, (or the keyboard) suddenly a bright light is shining on all her readers.

You reached for the Heavens and found it bare.You are not alone. A searching, seeking look into the unknown. You touched me.Profoundly brilliant

You have tried and succeeded in writing another beautiful poem.

Excellent! Excellent!

A poem as beautiful as morning mist Sparkles as a diamond ring.

beautiful as always, , , , an inspiring write, , ,

Beautiful words. We try and sometimes fail yet we must always remember to never give up. Thank you

There are many things that we cannot feel with all our senses of see, hear, taste, smell, and touch. Yet they may exist. Our conclusion may be different sometimes. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

There are times when we feel that all things are beyond our reach. At times it appears to us that everything has lost the former significance and life has no meaning! These are all passing phases of life and fleeting thoughts! Let us hope that once again, life will parade before us in all its glory and beauty! A touching write! !

A sad poem this but a good write, very powerful and moving. If god does exist and like all good agnostics I am firmly on the fence on this then look around and maybe he's in the things we see, of course maybe he's not and it all just evolution there again.......10/10 BB: O)

A terribly sad poem that brought me very close to tears.

Very moving, very powerful poem.

Lovely lines Val, but when all there seems to be is nought there is still hope, hope is something to cling to.

Beautiful write with amazing lines that are so vibrant they dance with life! !

Great poem. Enjoyed this one a lot.

A really wonderful poem, to touch the hand of god would be a wonderful thing.