Monday, December 7, 2009

I Tried.. Comments

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I tried to tell her with her music turned up so loud,
That I saw an image of her face in every passing cloud.
I tried to tell her as the truck drove by,
That I couldn't help but always get lost in her eyes.
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Joseph Cuevas
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Rachael Curtis 22 February 2010

How beautiful! ! =) I love your examples! I know exactly what you mean, working up enough courage is so hard. You are very good at writing about human emotion, please don't stop!

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Twilight Whispers 02 February 2010

Again, amazing :) You're really goood at this!

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Joseph Cuevas

Joseph Cuevas

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