Wednesday, December 23, 2009
I Travel Fifty Years Back When I Hear Your Melancholy Song Comments
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'Though he's black very handsome and a strong character,
Really a loving father.'
Mom always says when she's alive.
Oh! Dear Father, you left us almost fifty years ago,
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Sandra Fowler
23 December 2009
Great use of metaphor in this one. Your late father comes to vivid life in your evocative lines. Have a good Christmas, Sandra
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9/12/2025 5:50:35 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderfully evocative poem that remembers wistfully and sighs it's melancholy. Your soccer analogy is a powerful one. Superb poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥