I tossed up a handful of diamond bits
They stayed in the air for a while…
An’ came down to settle on the dust
I found them lying on her side
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Masterly and Maestro…’ I found them glistening in her eyes…’ mine too Sir… Yeah perfect culmination eventuality of poem lies in to make one sad or elated and so on… Voted 10 [hf] Ms. Nivedita UK
Beatiful and fully logical, sir.....your poems, coming straight from your heart are bound to be in the heart of your readers......regards.....
I like this simple little poem, almost like a rddle. The thought behind it is one that I have sympathy with - better to have a poet than a diamond broker by your side (unless the diamond broker is also a poet, of course!)
Love how the inner action find it's voice through your verbs..(smile)
A poem shining like a diamond itself...Very precious and heartfelt. A.
Sir, Your poems are real gems. How can mere stones truimph over them? Great thought. Great poem
wow...so lovely...very meaningful full of love... very lovely thoughts...carved into a poem a poem for a love one...so sweet.. Cant help but smile...smile..smile.. the second stanza is so great and heart-warming... diamonds are better but your poems are...forever... I love this...my fave.... 10++++ lovelots, Maia
After a long time i really smiled going through this one.. sweet n lovely.... :)
hello sir.. i m very sure.. i posted a longish comment on this one... i mean sometimes i get carried away a little and instead of talking about the poem and talk about some thing else all together... site troubles sometimes too... so i ll be short and concise and say.. this one is a beautiful in the conventional sense of the word! ! ! .... with lots of lovesss shashendra
beautiful..... just loved the poem. so heartfelt and simple. thank you.
finally here is a man who realises what women want, certainly not diamonds. this is priceless. one of your best romantic poems Kesav. i take it to my fav list. 10+ Mamta
May she lives, with heart full of your glistening debris.sweet poem!
Of course poem bits are more precious than the diamonds. Nice comparison, nice poem, Kesav.
i really like your poem....your words are magnificent and expressing! ! ! ! i will lend you an eye! !
a true poet is romantic even in his death bed.......... keshavji, you stunn me always....... how sweet...... catina's lines are also marvellous.............................
Kesav, you are a true romantic, and this poem proves it. Lovely poem 10+ Bob
What a wonderful poem. A poetic gem that shimmers like diamond. A great tribute to Poetry. Beautifully crafted and well executed. Onto my Poem List.