Saturday, August 29, 2015

I Took A Knee To Tie My Shoe Comments

Rating: 4.5

A good thing to have
is the gift to know
when the poem is spun
when to turn off the flow
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stephanie mellisa kievaughan
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2017

you have to listen to your heart where it is From Whence it came and where it fancies....physical, emotional, wishes, dreams, who is the king here? is it me that bows to you... or am i the queen...... nice poem. you are very original in your poems.. thank you. i read many of ur poems.. tony

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Amar Agarwala 10 September 2016

A very interesting poem... I congratulate the poetess for sharing it.

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Clarence Prince 17 February 2016

We all need practice bowing for there comes a day when every knee shall bow before God. Thanks for sharing, Stephanie, may God bless you in all things!

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 01 October 2015

Or is it You who Bows to me these lines are well visioned and until i came to the end of poem, the title kept me guessing. this is so creative. different. I liked it.

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Stephani Kievaughan 14 February 2016

purely my treatise and theory and or method to my inspiration to write poetry, and thank you for your comment. i also hope you soon find my latest poem posted

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Amitava Sur 27 September 2015

A lovely poem with so many wishes and dreams, satisfying the emotions the mind has. Thanks for sharing the poem with it's ideas inside.

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Gauri Vyas 26 September 2015

great idea and of course its undoubtedly well executed

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Nishtha Trivedi 26 September 2015

I love the way this poem flows so naturally... every time I read it I smile!

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Sranisha Francis 25 September 2015

Every time a new meaning in it. That is Humility.

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Stephani Kievaughan 14 February 2016

you are very correct.

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Sranisha Francis 25 September 2015

Yes, I liked it these words. The King of all the shrews. Or is it You who Bows to me We should bow for everything inoder to achieve it.

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Della Perry 23 September 2015

I like the way it flows like a song, I never know when a poem is done, I usually go with the flow and think about it later when I think I'm done. Sometimes it is like the words come from somewhere else above, who knows where from.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 September 2015

you have to listen to your heart where it is From Whence it came and where it fancies Most to be. it is really original in terms, language, idea and vision. thank you dear.

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Stephani Kievaughan 14 February 2016

when one ask's you what do you fancy. it means what do you crave the most if ask in reference to food or drink or entertainment. or what ever you desire according to the context of the original query.

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Hazel Durham 21 September 2015

Original, sassy full of life, listen to your heart and allow it to take you on a journey that gives you all the answers!

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Ayidah Goldfeather 20 September 2015

Nice, very nice. I like how it easily flowed while provoking thoughts.

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Ayidah Goldfeather 20 September 2015

nice, very nice. I like how it easily flowed while provoking thought.

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Liza Sudina 19 September 2015

The King of all the shrews. - Jesus for me. you have a very original mind!

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Stephani Kievaughan 14 February 2016

exactly what i intebded true poets to decode and decipher from it. we are seemingly very like minded.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 September 2015

Nicely envisioned, Loved reading it

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