I Too Need You … Comments

So Beautifully written, Your emotions flow so nicely through your writings.

emotions flow freely from your heart and find a way in PH...........

we too need you here sandhya! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice poem loved it given 10

beautiful piece, thanks for sharing

Well, punctuation problems and improper use of U for the word you aside, Sandhya, this is a fine poem. When have you ever read a poem in a book that had two or three or more exclamation marks after the last word in a line? And you will not see the word you as U in a book of poetry either. Once you overcome these problems, you have the talent to be a fine poet, for poetic feeling is in your words, not your U's or overabundant exclamation points. Carl.

really fantastic and have a deep emotion on your poem which also touch my heart

Your words strum the heart's cord. Very lovely, Sandhya

Love is much needed to live in these times of strife and hatred. Keep on submitting your words. Best Wishes Naseer

Don't let the critisizers get you down I love your writing it's cute and moving. Don't say you hate them then you will be a hater a hater of the haters which will push you further to nonexistence.

that's a lovely write..to whom it meant to be..its a nice verses for that person...good write...

touching write...successfully brought me into deep thoughts... on the feelings it conveyed to me... the pain...the loss..and the longing... love being expressed vividly.... 10++

its a lovely poem sandhya.....u write well

Effectively brings out the emotions and pain of separtion...Good one Sandhya

thanx..............I like it so much

Good poem...brings out the turmoil inside mind boisterously well...10

very nicely written with very good flow and rhymes....very well done..10

the artist has been the endless struggle that lovers enndure with rejection or unanticipated affections....at times I think such people need to read my 'Wondrous Fall' and 'You Can't Conquer A Rock' to understand where I went with my feelings at his pint in the cycle of life.....thanks for sharing

a true poem from the inner depths of mind... i too need you as a friend and reader.......... 10 votes