Sunday, December 30, 2012

I Too Dance In Rain Comments

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yearning of parched earth
melts the heart of heavens
rain falls.
fragrance rises from the soaked earth
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kishore rao rao
dance rain Earth clouds
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Steve Meador 17 January 2013

I think you could remove the first two lines and your poem would be stronger.

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