Tuesday, September 6, 2016

I Thought You Will Come... Comments

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I thought you will come
when i sink in the bath tub
bubbles around
vanishing one by one!
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Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar
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Enjoyed reading this lovely poem

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Dutendra Chamling 08 September 2016

Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar! Beautiful poem, your feeling has got sufficient language in your poem. Thumbs up!

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Shabati Dokyu 03 September 2016

A beautiful poem, indeed. I hope you could write more poems. It seems really you have a talent for it.

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Thank you Shabati Dokyu. Will write more poems for sure. :)

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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2016

A beautiful and well written love poem, Lakshmi. Thank you for sharing

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Thank you for supporting words, Kelly Kurt.

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