I thought you will come
when i sink in the bath tub
bubbles around
vanishing one by one!
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Lakshmi Varanashi Adkathimar! Beautiful poem, your feeling has got sufficient language in your poem. Thumbs up!
A beautiful poem, indeed. I hope you could write more poems. It seems really you have a talent for it.
Thank you Shabati Dokyu. Will write more poems for sure. :)
A beautiful and well written love poem, Lakshmi. Thank you for sharing
Enjoyed reading this lovely poem