Wednesday, March 11, 2009

I Thought My Eyes Were Stinging Comments

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I thought my eyes were stinging
Till I saw a blind man pass,
I thought my legs were aching
Till I saw a cripple there,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Vaibhav Pandey 25 March 2009

brillaint poem sir...great thughts written so artfully...10

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Sandra Martyres 23 March 2009

A very thought provoking and poignant poem....well written 10+

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Thad Wilk 21 March 2009

Andrew! Beautifully written, poignant and touching to the heart. After reading this poem i thought, i'm really grateful for what i've got.. Best wishes! ! *10plus*! ! Friend Thad

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Andrew This poem of awareness is not only skilfully written, but also brings awareness to others to really value what they do have. t is also a piece that can be easily remembered, and could be taught to children to give them important values for their future.... Karin Anderson

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Alison Cassidy 15 March 2009

This is glorious, Andrew. Beautifully delivered, with a profound message. It is certainly chastening to be reminded of those whose impoverished lives make our middle class comfortable ones look like royalty. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ramesh T A 14 March 2009

Reality of the world is well reflected in your poem. Nice to read again a good piece of poem!

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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2009

You have empathy with those who are less fortunate than yourself. A lovely compassionate write.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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Wendy Bureau 12 March 2009

a little food for thought here.. So easy it is to overlook the simple pleasures one has.. the saying holds true.. you don't know what you got till it's gone.. A gem of a write Andrew! Wendy

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Lynda Robson 11 March 2009

Another poem written by a caring heart, we all take for granted what we have, brilliant write Andy, you make the world brighter, 10 Lynda xx

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Nice work mate. We must remember what we have and not what we want. George

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