Wednesday, December 7, 2005

I Thought It Would Rain Today Comments

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I thought it would rain today
sky hanging low & threatening
but like a bully w/o balls
it merely blustered:
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Hugh Cobb
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A. Michael Sears 28 December 2005

Wonderful write Mr. Cobb.

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G. Murdock 21 December 2005

Yes! This builds like a storm, becomes like thunder and rain. Such lightning of truth. It came close to a rant but kept the distance enough to be like the winter light, indirect yet illuminating. Good poem Hugh

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Gershon Hepner 19 December 2005

I have re-read this poem for the second time today. It gets better all the time, unlike the weather, best Gershon

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Ulrike Gerbig 09 December 2005

i really like that! u.

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Uriah Hamilton 08 December 2005

Good poem, most of us do get too mesmerized by the Weather station.

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Hugh Cobb

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