I thought I saw you moving in the shadows
Drifting through the silence of the night
How brightly shone your eyes that were upon me
A vision oh so beauteous to my sight
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Hi Valerie I'm just a new member, today and yours is one of the first I have read and commented on. This was written with such feeling, so heart felt. Thanks for sharing Annette.
Hi Annette, and welcome to Poemhunter. Thank you for reading and commenting, much appreciated.
Beautifully written. We never really lose the ones we love. They are in our hearts and minds forever as you've just conveyed.
I am always grateful for the fleeting glimpses of the faces of those I have loved, and lost...be them, in truth, only seen with the eyes of my broken heart. Your poem is a lovely tribute, I offer my shared sympathy for your loss. PEACE
And I shall linger here set deep in sorrow... Beautiful! . Well thought out and written with true emotions.
You express your thoughts so vividly and effortlessly. A lovely and moving poem, I share your loss and certainly wish you all the best. Continue to be strong my friend.
A very deep and moving write. Obviously the love that you shared echoes loudly in this poem. A beautiful rose was plucked from the garden and then cared for by God. Keep on looking up Val. I have a poem titled He Cares. I believe that it was written just for you. lol and regards.
love lingers long after it has left. reflections last forever, a lovely poem. live it.
So many poems you have written about your true love, and now he's gone, as you continue to write even more beautiful verses in his honor, he must have been a true inspiration to your work. My condolences to you for your loss....
So nice expression of the loss of beloved - it touches the heart. A combination of love and agony - very well defined.
Your light will shine forever as my guide ... Again our love to shine forever true Feelings of the heart beautifully delivered. They definitely reach to whom they are intended.
Beautifully difficult to read Val. It brought tears to my eyes.
Very moving poem indeed. I hope it is me that goes through this and not my dear Elvira.
A very moving and heartfelt write overflowing with your deep love, just so beautiful!
val, just a beautiful refection of your enduring love. I hope he can read it from afar. Dick
In this beautiful verse I see pain and longing that time sadly will unlikely ever mend.
’m reaching out, my darling, so to touch you But you are just an image in my mind And though I’ll never once more hear you breathing Your heart with mine shall ever be entwined. no words to write. its beyond excellent. :)
I should join with Kavya akka on this. My eyes were wet after reading this. Love is eternal ma'am! Its a bond not broken even by death. Please be on this site and we all are here to support you.
a great write, , , , i can sense the emotions, my eyes are already wet!
Beautiful is the least i can say about your pen and deep hard, you made me feel your pain and sorrow and opened a gate into your suffering and yet strong heart! Thank you for your beautiful writing
Thank you Hdil for reading and commenting, very much appreciated, and I am pleased you enjoyed.