i thought i loved you but then you broke my heart
i thought i loved you but then you just slapped a band-aid over it,
and then it broke into more pieces
i thought i loved you when you said 'forever and ever baby'
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good writing. but you should rewrite it with words that rhyme but mean the same. but then again it might be perfect the way it is.
A smart poignant love poem.