Saturday, October 10, 2020

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The sun slowly leaves the sky
I know I'm going to start to cry
Because you are the one
Who's telling us goodbye
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Ray Hansell
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2020

The sun slowly leaves the sky I know I'm going to start to cry....Darkness and sorrow give you crying but sunrise and love make you happy. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.

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L Milton Hankins 10 October 2020

This is an excellent lament in quatrains. Nice job, Ray!

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