Monday, February 15, 2016

I Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought I had you
I thought I had real love
I was happy for a while
I was drunk on love's fire
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Nosheen Irfan
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I am speechless as I swim in the this sad sea of sheer speldor.. I thought... Well done my friend!

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Ayman Parray 17 February 2016

A beautiful poem, Nosheen. It leaves me spellbound as if I am in a dream. I shall read no more for a while, I want to stay in this dream like state.

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 February 2016

Sigh! Million dreams shattered by your insensitive attitude. I thought became I knew.. one more heart wrenching poem from your pen which leaves the readers in gloom. Beautiful poem.

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Edmund Strolis 16 February 2016

How rare it seems that two hold the same dream. That is why there is true love and fleeting love. Your writing captures this and is revealed in a poets hands.

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Valsa George 16 February 2016

The painful realization that everything was a delusion makes you stand aghast......... but it gives razor like poignancy to your thoughts! Quite sad though!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 15 February 2016

Everything have love and pain like the two sides of a coin....Beautiful.....thank you for sharing :)

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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