I thought I had you
I thought I had real love
I was happy for a while
I was drunk on love's fire
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A beautiful poem, Nosheen. It leaves me spellbound as if I am in a dream. I shall read no more for a while, I want to stay in this dream like state.
Sigh! Million dreams shattered by your insensitive attitude. I thought became I knew.. one more heart wrenching poem from your pen which leaves the readers in gloom. Beautiful poem.
How rare it seems that two hold the same dream. That is why there is true love and fleeting love. Your writing captures this and is revealed in a poets hands.
The painful realization that everything was a delusion makes you stand aghast......... but it gives razor like poignancy to your thoughts! Quite sad though!
Everything have love and pain like the two sides of a coin....Beautiful.....thank you for sharing :)
I am speechless as I swim in the this sad sea of sheer speldor.. I thought... Well done my friend!