i'm over the sappy pathetic stories
i wanna write poetry about my glories
either that or killing, its a two track mind
speakin' of either one of 'em helps me unwind
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Hmm. Sounds like a confession from a serial killer. If that is what you were aiming for, you achieved it nicely.
I absolutely fell in love with this poem when I read it. If that makes me sick... then so be it. :) Beautifully written.10.