Wednesday, October 11, 2017

I Think Not! Comments

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Should I die
Lonesome night
Heart betrayed
Born loser
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Richard Wlodarski
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Unwritten Soul 12 October 2017

I wish i spell words out and sound the same like what it sound from your mouth...i remember when i was a teenager, i feel like the same wish...but then sober come but some other time i just shut it close. maybe we just human and feeling is like the moving clouds on the wind...never fixed....but we will keep moving

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Richard Wlodarski 20 October 2017

Soul, I am humbled and honoured. Thank you so much!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

While heart betrays this provokes thought and brings death. But heart does not betray and gives love.10

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Richard Wlodarski 11 October 2017

Kumarmani, thank you so much for your insights.

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