Thursday, May 24, 2018

I Think It Was Bobby Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think it was Bobby,
or maybe it was Mike;
(time seems to wander
off with more and more
...
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Seamus O' Brian
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Bharati Nayak 03 February 2019

A thought provoking and compelling write that deals with issues of social behaviour- - -There are some event which are etched in our memories- -What are the factors that lead to ghastly incidents of shootings in schools ? Parents, teachers, society and Governments should come together to find the cause and its solution.

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Susan Williams 31 May 2018

I am always guaranteed a powerful read, an important read, a poetic read when I read a poem by you. They - -you know, the ubiquitous they- -say smell is the post potent key to unlocking memories. I believe that. What you did with smells- first the vomit of children and last the blood of our children- -brought me to my knees. I think the solution will be a multi-pronged one- -but it won't stop all of it. 10++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list

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BRILLIANT! A vivid portrayal of the pattern of social behavior that could lead to the commission of heinous crimes. Thought provoking poem beautifully and intelligently crafted.10 and onto my Poem List.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

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