Thursday, November 12, 2009

I Think It Is Love Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wasting my confidence
I lost all my independence
When you are not by my side
Because you are not there not even my guide
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Luwi Habte
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Mohamed Poetic Soul Ahmed 23 December 2009

Luwi u young n amazing poet i loved it totally amazing keep da good work up Mohamed

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John Mcmanus 25 November 2009

Very nice Luwi you capture the readers imagination and you never let go, keep it up.

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Prashant Shaurya 25 November 2009

i was just lost lost for a while when i read this poem... Luwi you are a genuine being and a wonderful poet too... i could relate the poem for we share the same age group.. thank you for sharing.. love prashant

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Henry Brown 23 November 2009

Very interesting. You have to think hard to absorb the message. Well written

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Nathan Barkley 16 November 2009

Very beautiful. I liked that poem

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Dipy Hermonite 16 November 2009

Luwi you have great talent. I loved the flow of this poem. Good work.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 15 November 2009

love teaches lot in our life... nice concept, poetry about love is always refreshing no matter how old the topic is..

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Alf Hutchison 14 November 2009

Love fate...that's a new concept Luwi... regards Alf

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

Well expressed young lady

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

Well expressed... These are the feelings (hurting) mornings and.........change the word hurts

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 November 2009

A genuine and innocent expression of love. Your loved one is lucky.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 November 2009

fate teaches you a lot in life...one subject is love good poignant write...much soil is seen eroded off there...10

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Carol Gall 14 November 2009

love fate good write 10

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