Wasting my confidence
I lost all my independence
When you are not by my side
Because you are not there not even my guide
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Very nice Luwi you capture the readers imagination and you never let go, keep it up.
i was just lost lost for a while when i read this poem... Luwi you are a genuine being and a wonderful poet too... i could relate the poem for we share the same age group.. thank you for sharing.. love prashant
Very interesting. You have to think hard to absorb the message. Well written
Luwi you have great talent. I loved the flow of this poem. Good work.
love teaches lot in our life... nice concept, poetry about love is always refreshing no matter how old the topic is..
Well expressed... These are the feelings (hurting) mornings and.........change the word hurts
A genuine and innocent expression of love. Your loved one is lucky.
fate teaches you a lot in life...one subject is love good poignant write...much soil is seen eroded off there...10
Luwi u young n amazing poet i loved it totally amazing keep da good work up Mohamed