Friday, May 14, 2010

(i Think I) Want You Comments

Rating: 2.7

Immortal, incomparable
Inconceivable to many, this truth:
As the stars washed up on
painful shores, night falls.
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Effie Yalena Steyn
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Matt Mooney 14 May 2010

You write with the blinds half drawn on the window of your soul. Your poem is full of the intrigue of discovering love in your heart.Looks like there is pent up and unexpressed passion for the other in the words 'fist' and 'balled'.That's what I mean by intrigue-I want to know what happened next and if your love blossomed.

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