Tuesday, October 6, 2009

*i Think I Might Be Dieing Comments

Rating: 2.9

I think I might be dieing
My health is disappearing
I think my time is coming
Symptoms keep stopping and reappearing
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Shelby Renee
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Shelby. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Rick Adriolo 23 November 2013

It's sad when I see this is the last poem you submitted.. Wrote in 2009.. and I'm reading it now end 2013.. It makes me wonder.. Was this your last poetic breath or a scream for help.. Hopefully you just stopt writing.. take care..

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