Thursday, May 5, 2011

I Think I Can, I Know I Can Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was a little kid I thought I could run.
But then I fell down and that wasn't fun.
As I started to grow up I tried new things.
Like riding a bike and taking whatever life brings.
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Adam Smitherman
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Romeo Della Valle 05 May 2011

A very well crafted and poignant write! 1+++ Obviously, you have what it takes to make it through the Poetry World, talent! Keep it up and I will always be of assistance if needed! Love and Peace for always! ...

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