Tuesday, May 6, 2014

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Sometimes I lie awake at night
And think of the battles I've tried to
fight
I think of how no matter where I go
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Vishal Sharma
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Vishal Sharma 06 May 2014

From : To : Date Time : Subject Cleveland Gibson (FARINGDON United Kingdom; Male; 69) Vizard Dhawan 5/6/2014 4: 46: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) I think The content of the poem is good and the last line well constructed with meaning. Other lines tended to be a little too long and not so sharp. However, well done for posting your poem

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