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: To
: Date Time
: Subject
Cleveland Gibson (FARINGDON United
Kingdom; Male; 69)
Vizard Dhawan
5/6/2014 4: 46: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
I think
The content of the poem is good and
the last line well constructed with
meaning. Other lines tended to be a
little too long and not so sharp.
However, well done for posting your
poem
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From : To : Date Time : Subject Cleveland Gibson (FARINGDON United Kingdom; Male; 69) Vizard Dhawan 5/6/2014 4: 46: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) I think The content of the poem is good and the last line well constructed with meaning. Other lines tended to be a little too long and not so sharp. However, well done for posting your poem