Sunday, July 24, 2005

I Think Comments

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I think, therefore, I am....
the sum of my thought processes,
a self-aware consciousness,
assimilating bits and pieces
...
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Pamela Davison
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Poetry Hound 24 July 2005

I like your poetry although I think you could cut down on the thesaurus. Sometimes some intentionally simple words can provide a nice breather between all the big ones.

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