I Then Wore His Eyes… Comments

And your country is? That could be part of the poem. Don't let it end here.

This is a poem at the margins of understanding for a reader. It is for the reader to decide on his or her investment in this piece. There is a real question about the reward that might be available after finishing. That too, is up for negotiation with the author. I choose not to bid. GW62

Superb, outstanding. fantastic, mindblowing.......a 10 for you.

a masterpiece is definitely in the making... these lines conjure that eye-captivating visage resonant imagery used here well done