Tuesday, April 15, 2014

I Thee Wed Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wasn't taller than her doll-house.
She was still writing to Santa Claus.
Dark curly hair and wide open eyes
she piously kneeled piercing the skies.
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Magdalena Biela
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Kim Barney 29 March 2020

Maddalena, my friend! I haven't talked with you for a while! I have commented on this poem before, but I had to come back and read it again. I am going to mention it in my Puzzle Master Quiz 050, to be posted the day after tomorrow.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 July 2018

wow so sweet so sweet- She smiled to Him and silently said: 'With this life and love I Thee wed! '. yes excellent - I Thee wed

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

With this heart I thank you deeply...

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Practicing Poetess 21 July 2018

An amazing poem! I like this very much. Congrats on Poem of the Day! :)

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

Thank you for being so kind to my poem and to me...

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Sylva 21 July 2018

She blossomed slowly as a dark Rose. Nicely written and well communicated.

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

All my heart blossoms in joy...thank you!

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It's a good thing I had a box of tissues nearby.Your poem is beautiful and heartfelt..I still have tears in my eyes because your poem is very touching..Faith in Love! A ten..

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

Dear Lord, I was surprised to aknowledge that my poem was chosen poem of the day for reasons unknown to me, but to bring tears to someone's eyes makes me cry...Blessed you be...

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Irfanulla Shariff 21 July 2018

She smiled to Him and silently said: 'With this life and love I Thee wed! '. The last two lines are one of a kind. Very musical, rhyming and heartfelt poem. Great composition! No wonder, it is the poem of the day. Congratulations, Magdalena!

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

If words could hug I would be now holding you from Finland to the place you live...thank you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 July 2018

This lovely poem touched my heart and with such an eloquence created, with much care and love. This is an amazing poem about love. The photograph is adorable, the reader can watch that for hours, I reckon. I can imagine how you feel after being chosen as Member Poem Of The Day, WOW! I have enjoyed immensely.Congratulations, Magdalena! GBU in abundance.

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you for all your wonderful thoughts...I am very surprised that my poem was chosen poem of the day...I have never lived in a country where the native language is English, I am not a native, my English is all from books, my teachers were the classics before the university...I feeel really overwhelmed...happy...

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Happy to know your reaction, thank you for your honest response, yes, it is a WOW! Wonderful poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 July 2018

A beautiful love poem with a smooth flow. Enjoyed very much. Congrats on being chosen as poem of the day.

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you heartily! ! !

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Siddartha Montik 21 July 2018

Certainly a Classical, a true poetry! ! much deeper in meaning and to depths of Heart! Congratulations for POD! 10++!

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Classical education taught me English...then my wonderful teachers and Professors and, of course, all the writers I read (past, present and future tense!) ...I love my poems as I love Poetry...thank you: it takes one to feel one...

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Haidee Majola 21 July 2018

A beautiful love story. Congrats for POD selection. 👍👍👍

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

All my heart for a friendly comment...thank you!

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Adrian Flett 21 July 2018

Wonderful evocative imagery. 'she piously kneeled piercing the skies'

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

My heart is filled with happiness...thank you...

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Sarah Persson 21 July 2018

Absolutely stunning poem, such beautiful words written delightfully and delicately. I loved this poem. Congratulations on a very well deserved poem of the day Maria.

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you heartily for being so kind...Blessed it be!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2018

So lovely poem on love nicely executed. last two lines say........ She smiled to Him and silently said: 'With this life and love I Thee wed! ' Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you for being so kind to my humble poem...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 July 2018

A fabulous poem... sweet poetic expression! Loved the use of simile in the first line of second stanza! Many congratulations for this wonderful piece of work being chosen as POD!

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

With all my heart, thank you!

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Kim Barney 21 July 2018

Beautiful poem, Maddalena! Congrats on having it finally chosen as member poem of the day!

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you, my friend! ! ! I am as surprised as you are! ! !

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you, my friend! I am as surprised as you are...

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2018

Pious hope underlines this well crafted write.++10

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

Thank you, dear friend, for your kind thoughts...

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Daniel Brick 25 January 2015

This is a mystical poem in which love is lifted out of the sensory world to the World of the Spirit or the Spiritual. It's amazing how an art as sensory and sensual as poetry has also served the needs of ascetics and other spiritual seekers. But it does as countless mystic poets have shown. This poem has a heightened tone, an almost breathless intensity, and an utter confidence that there is a cosmic Mind that hears these pledges of service and sacrifice. You made this young woman very real to me. And I can only hope that her real-life counterpart succeeds in attaining the spiritual life.

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Magdalena Biela 21 July 2018

My wonderful Professor / Poet / Friend, thank you for being YOU, for understanding me and loving my humble poems...

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Louis Cordoba 16 April 2014

She opened her bud, her thorns she killed only in that moment of fate when she met the Evening Star...the same very wild thorns that brought bleeding to her many foes. Every wild Rose wants to be picked and breathed by the only one, the loved one. Every wild Rose wants to punish the daring hands of the greedy arrogant silly lovers. This poem speaks volumes to me about a fight between the divine and worldly love

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 April 2014

...She opened her bud, her thorns she killed, ....divine or satanic know not clearly but she uttered boldly.....appreciate.

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