Wednesday, March 21, 2012

I, The Soldier Comments

Rating: 4.8

I killed a man today, did not know his name
I did not know his history, I am the one to blame
I searched his pocket for grenades and guns
Found a photo of his three little children having fun
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Kumar Parashar
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Wahab Abdul 26 March 2012

the concept is brilliant, for the concept only i give you 100/100. and the rest said by other reviewers and i am fully with them.

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Sharad Juneja 24 March 2012

kumar its a fantastic work.... really enjoyed reading ... a small advice just make it a bit crisp..thats it ...rest its' beautiful

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Cody Maxie 22 March 2012

Really interesting poem, way to go.

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Valerie Dohren 21 March 2012

An all too familiar story in these very troubled times. Well written.

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Martin O'Neill 21 March 2012

Kudos. As an ex soldier I can relate to much of what you have so eloquently penned here, the insecurities, the realisation that the 'enemy' has children, dreams, family, too. A fine piece of writing Kumar

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