Wednesday, February 10, 2010

I Tested God's Love Comments

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Her twin sister was born perfect two days before she came
But, she arrived two days later, alas who was to blame?
It seemed that from conception, her luck was not the same
For she knew she would be destined for heartbreak and shame
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 10 February 2010

God's love does not test, but we do the testing of His love. His love is so great and has no boundaries, and though our sins be as big as the biggest ship, His love is as wide as the sea. Proof of His love was the thief/murderer on the cross, who was forgiven and was the first to enter Paradise, the adulterous woman who was forgiven, the Samaritan woman at the well who had several husbands, and all others who needed forgiveness and ACCEPTANCE (like me) . He said 'Come to Me all you who are weary, and I will give you rest.' Your piece was more a story than a poem, and a little arrangement can turn it into a wonderful narrative poem. But on the whole it is deeply moving, honest, cutting and relevant. Our young people need to read it.

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Lashawn Lovell 10 February 2010

wow, what a great testimony poem it blessed me.

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