Tuesday, February 18, 2020

I Tempt And Tease Comments

Rating: 5.0

The endless joy,
No endless shame.
Of tightly grasping,
Love's forbidden flame.
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Shaun Cronick
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Soran M. H 18 February 2020

Hello and Thanks Sir, it is Very nice rhymed stanzas with serious theme and some joy, the professional poet Shaun always bringing to us in his lovely poems a different subjects in different forms, well done it deserves 10/10

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Shaun Cronick 18 February 2020

Thanks again good Soran glad you liked it. Don't know about the Sir bit never one for knighthoods. Had a quiet work day and pulled some poem threads together some might work and some might crash and burn. But hey! Better a lion to roar than a mouse to squeak. You don't know till you try. And your latest poem Childhood, Soran, is just captivating. Thank you and take care.

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