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welcome Edidiong Etukudoh Just now · Unlike · 1

as expected, great lines. 2 Aug by jerry mozes to I tease

good work Judie Jackson37 minutes ago Love the flow and feel of this poet's work. He shows much depth and insight in construction and bringing the poem to its climax. Very good work! Comment 0

good work gannicus Gallic40 minutes ago Great poem nice work can you read and review one of mine

Meh Jakob Cordes38 minutes ago As I find so often with poetry posted to this site, far too often really, this is a basically good message, but it's obscured and tainted by confused structure and bad syntax. I get what the idea of the poem is, but the experience is ruined by my having to correct it in my mind to make it readable. Comment +1

Life is a journey Patricia Calhoun-Porter39 minutes ago Maybe we'll get another day, but if not, make the best out of Today. Comment +1

It's ok Sarah Adams41 minutes ago Nice

welcom Attia Saeed, Rohani Daud and Cheryl Serious Nwankwo like this. Just now · Unlike · 1

Quite Interesting poem. Beautiful lines.... Of course I tease And release Some sentences To make you little tense.....Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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