Wednesday, September 16, 2009

I Talk To Dragonfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

I talk to dragonfly
Why he seems so sad
Otherwise after receiving
A candy from the smiling angel
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COMMENTS
Noel Horlanda 22 September 2009

good imagery, talking to flies that's amazing. Well penned...cheers

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Allan Macli Borges 21 September 2009

i really enjoyed it... the beings you've used to show fellings and pondering were well selected... good one.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 September 2009

oooooh. This is a good one.

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Omar Ibrahim 18 September 2009

wow! ! ! ! it's stunning....the repetition(i talk to.....why) is good for this poem...however some of us use the repetition incorrectly...keep writing please...10

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Louis Rams 17 September 2009

keep on talking to them, for they are on the wings of angels.

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Obinna Eruchie 17 September 2009

Use of these insects to express yourself is adorable.

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These flying insects are all part of nature's plan and purpose and they should be respected and I think they are great metaphors to express how you feel. This poem is unique and butterflies are my favorite as they are so spiritual. 10 love Karin

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Joseph Poewhit 17 September 2009

They have a way of hovering

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Catrina Heart 17 September 2009

all flies have somethings to offer in this world and represents great wisdon to us in the end..........lovely 10++++

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 17 September 2009

something that was different to read

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 September 2009

I love all these flies.So colourful.

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Mubeen Sadhika 17 September 2009

simply beautiful. Nicely expressed. Liked a lot.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 September 2009

All the insects come handy to express your feelings thru' this poem.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 16 September 2009

beautiful, very nice to read

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