I talk to dragonfly
Why he seems so sad
Otherwise after receiving
A candy from the smiling angel
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i really enjoyed it... the beings you've used to show fellings and pondering were well selected... good one.
wow! ! ! ! it's stunning....the repetition(i talk to.....why) is good for this poem...however some of us use the repetition incorrectly...keep writing please...10
keep on talking to them, for they are on the wings of angels.
These flying insects are all part of nature's plan and purpose and they should be respected and I think they are great metaphors to express how you feel. This poem is unique and butterflies are my favorite as they are so spiritual. 10 love Karin
all flies have somethings to offer in this world and represents great wisdon to us in the end..........lovely 10++++
All the insects come handy to express your feelings thru' this poem.
good imagery, talking to flies that's amazing. Well penned...cheers