I Syndrome Comments
“I” always remained alone
Liked isolation and preferred to be one
Shed tears over what was already gone
No, why, if and buts bothered one by one
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JRNightingale 2012.01.09 15: 54 Totally agree with your sentiment. However in modern society I feel that 'I' has been replaced with 'me'. Reply Da Date & Time: 1/9/2012 9: 39: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 29399269 - I Syndrome Member: Razorblade Goodchild Comment: Very nice Hasmukh! Traditionally the rhyming flows better from the 1st to 3rd line, and 2nd to 4th line. Not from 1st to 2nd line, and 3rd to 4th line! That's my personal preference but its a good poem! ! ! keep writing.
Very nice Hasmukh! Traditionally the rhyming flows better from the 1st to 3rd line, and 2nd to 4th line. Not from 1st to 2nd line, and 3rd to 4th line! That's my personal preference but its a good poem! ! ! keep writing.
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7/28/2025 9:31:23 AM # 1.0.0
A great flowing poem, wonderful work. A fantastic write.