Wednesday, January 18, 2017

I Swim In A Swimming Pool This Afternoon Comments

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I swim in a swimming pool, this afternoon
Of which, one half is in full sun, another one half in shade.
I have cut grass and trimmed bushes the whole day.
It's a very hot summer day and sweats soaked my clothes
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Dung Nguyen 18 January 2017

Thank you for sharing your poem, I Swim In A Swimming Pool This Afternoon. This is interesting poem! : The sun is about one half way on western sky Its golden rays horizontally shine on cloud dogs Under warm, blue afternoon sky Sad cries of a mourning dove came from afar.... Beautifully written!

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