Friday, November 7, 2014

I Suspect …. Comments

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In a dense forest I wandered
On the wings of pensiveness
Crazy branches embrace themselves
Whisper around and resonates
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SALINI NAIR
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Amitava Sur 14 November 2014

Getting lost in the dense forest in it's zigzag, possibly Suspicion is the base of human nature ......... this is the gist of your penning.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 November 2014

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Valsa George 09 November 2014

Through a beautiful forest scene, you have brought out a basic human nature of suspecting everything! Like Akhtarji.... I too experience the same difficulty in understanding your poems! Salini, each time I read your poems I wish if they were accompanied with the poet's note...! I have difficulty in understanding some of the words you use.... they are beyond my vocabulary!

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Salini Nair 09 November 2014

Akhtar sir your interpretation is accurate...we approach everything with suspicion...even in a dense forest we doubt trees …from the background of a dense forest I want to say that ….thanks

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Salini Nair 09 November 2014

Akhtar sir your interpretation is accurate...we approach everything with suspicion...even in a dense forest we doubt trees …from the background of a dense forest I want to say that ….thanks

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 November 2014

Beautiful poem composed wonderfully with the beauty of nature narrated so beautifully......amazing piece

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Akhtar Jawad 07 November 2014

This world is a forest and its inhabitants appear in zigzag arrays, at every step of our life we suspect someone, and we thinkt moving towards him may be hazardous, although he may be sincere to us. That is how I understood this poem. I confess it's not easy to understand the poems of Salini and I may be completely wrong. I think Saliny should be kind enough to favor her readers with a poet's note.

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Kee Thampi 07 November 2014

a lovable sweet poem There a breeze tattle and passed by and meadow of greenery and shadow of moon

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