Sunday, February 18, 2018

I Survived Comments

Rating: 5.0

A hunter shot at a bear.
But he missed the bear.
The bear started to sing, I'm alive and I survived.
By the time that I finish this song.
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Lamar Cole
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Rini Shibu 18 February 2018

Lucky bear..good one Lamar

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

Oh my lucky bear and poor darned hunter. This had me giggling, run hunter run. Super rhyming clerihew light poem. Thumbs up. Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too titled 'song for lunarlovers

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 February 2018

It is beautiful poem with wonderful imaginary. Thanks for sharing.

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