Wednesday, July 29, 2009

.....I Surrender To Your Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your loves essential oil overflows
A personified influence in the making
Of our love for the
Meaning of my being on earth
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Ken e Hall
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Ramesh Rai 28 July 2013

divine embracement. too much soothing. nice one sir with regards

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Beautiful soothing words that lends to the title...great job Ken...a 10

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Lady Grace 01 October 2009

the title alone can give comfort to readers...

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Patti Masterman 23 August 2009

Like the simple rhyme scheme and the controlled emotion that well out.

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Roman Petrov 08 August 2009

passionate! I like it...

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dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

love captures your heart, mind...and makes you surrender totally...lovely write...

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Reshma Ramesh 03 August 2009

beautiful love poem...............very romantic

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Anjali Sinha 31 July 2009

your poem touches my core........ 'You are my love song That needs no words, ' lovely as always -10 anjali

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

'My pretty thing You are my love song That needs no words, My symphony Without a note, I lay down my cloak I am addicted To your eternal embrace I surrender' Hello sir.. this is very musical and lovely indeed.. I loved this one.. filled with emotions too.. best poetry comes when written from the core of ones heart.....10+++ with lots of love Shan

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Meggie Gultiano 29 July 2009

I am addicted To your eternal embrace wowww, what a write..I love this, Ken

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Carol Gall 29 July 2009

lovely write ken.....

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