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Short, sweet and deep. This poem is awesome.

a nice one with an interesting twist! 10+

Nice meditative poem about love, thank you for sharing...10+++

Nice i Love it.10! i like how the rhythm is exposed

nice narration. good to read.10++++

i love the imagery. We all submit to something, and the twist at the end was cool........10

'i submit to your body / i admit to this slavery / tender touch and blissful kiss / breaking free of freedoms mist / for love is to submit...' sweet words of love that show the power of love to warm the bearer into submission.