Tuesday, September 1, 2009
I Stop Here Comments
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What if I said
I will lie here
in this place
And cease to breath
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Martin Swords
06 September 2009
Hi Terri... Your third verse is a thought I would like to have written. Actually I feel that this poem would be complete with just the first and third verses.I could live without the second verse one way or another. We all see things differently. Keep in touch Thanks Martin
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7/19/2025 1:36:48 PM # 1.0.0
I like all four with the supposition of the first leading to the potential of the second, the brilliant third and the powerful last. I cannot help ut see a Mona Lisa-like painting of you as a memorial for HIS mind.