I Stood And Watched.... Comments

Couples dissolution idea, dictated by society (the boat and the sea) is extremely painful and, sometimes, all we can do is to stay and watch. Apparently there is no solution.We need to search it. Wonderful poem.10+

Awesome - my kind of write in every way, the emotion, the word choice, the unbridled honesty - all of it!

a touching write..departing a love is indeed painful

yes a moving, touching one indeed sir..I felt it to the core...nice...10+++ see you regards shan

A lovely haunting write Chris, I like the part about travelling the tides of emotion, well penned 10 Lynda xx