I still remember that day..
When first time we talked..
Hands in hands we walked..
Pledge of being loyal you did say…
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Sweet and simple. Love has more to give than to lose. Betrayal is there. Soit has more taste unknown to all. My poems await your reading. Hope to soothe your agony. Awaiting your reply
emotionally strong ink.This is the plight of a pretty girl who has been betrayed.Can feel it.
Pure run of emotions decribed beautifully in poetic manner.. :) really a beautiful one Pooja..
the repetition makes it stronger...the flow is good and tells a great story..thanks for sharing... :)
its really painful....but yet fascinating...i got cling to it while reading i just wanted know more and more as i go along with every word.........in short i loved it...
very emotive in feel.......u turned up each verse very convincingly and attacking hearts to tear for tearful lines....... i like your practicality in writing and choosing themes.........thanks for sharing! ! :)
i liked ur poem.............................as am also a victim of it!
invigorating and in-depth research on broken hearts..i appreciate