Tuesday, July 10, 2012

I Still Remember ≪/3 ≪/3 ≪/3 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I still remember that day..
When first time we talked..
Hands in hands we walked..
Pledge of being loyal you did say…
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Pooja Karnani
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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

invigorating and in-depth research on broken hearts..i appreciate

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Sweet and simple. Love has more to give than to lose. Betrayal is there. Soit has more taste unknown to all. My poems await your reading. Hope to soothe your agony. Awaiting your reply

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 July 2012

emotionally strong ink.This is the plight of a pretty girl who has been betrayed.Can feel it.

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Sharad Juneja 11 July 2012

Pure run of emotions decribed beautifully in poetic manner.. :) really a beautiful one Pooja..

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Shouvik Roy 10 July 2012

the repetition makes it stronger...the flow is good and tells a great story..thanks for sharing... :)

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Payal Parande 10 July 2012

its really painful....but yet fascinating...i got cling to it while reading i just wanted know more and more as i go along with every word.........in short i loved it...

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 10 July 2012

very emotive in feel.......u turned up each verse very convincingly and attacking hearts to tear for tearful lines....... i like your practicality in writing and choosing themes.........thanks for sharing! ! :)

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Jitendra Kumar Sahoo 10 July 2012

i liked ur poem.............................as am also a victim of it!

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