Wednesday, August 8, 2012

I Still Remember Comments

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Every day I try to recollect
the times I have spent
with Our Father in His presence
I still dwell there
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Kasia Fedyk
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Marcus Mckinley 15 August 2012

verse 4 line 3 where = were the intangible forces of love can not be bottled or sold but, contained in heart and soul. and you are a vessal through which it spreads. well done

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2012

It would be wonderful if we could make a heaven on earth - lovely write Kasia.

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Neetha Sasidharan 12 August 2012

ofcourse.....we can but only if we make our heart pure and free of jealous and fill it with love......grt poem and grt message....kp penning..

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Heather Wilson 12 August 2012

Love comes in many forms, Kasia, this is just such a beautiful thoughtful write, Can we take a piece of heaven with us and make it on earth....lovely.

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Neela Nath Das 11 August 2012

Heaven is really in your earthly world. Loved, this piece.

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Eric Cockrell 11 August 2012

that piece of heaven resides within you! beautiful poem!

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Hamid Negah 08 August 2012

Kasia, thank you very much.

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